12 tips for writing better sentences as a creative writer:

1. Avoid confusingly complex sentences
2. Set the tone with word choices
3. Avoid passive voice
4. Remove filter
5. Set the pace with the sentence length
6. Avoid body parts taking action
7. Reduce the /"was -ing/" construction
8. Keep the wording natural
9. Cut unnecessary comparisons
10. Use vocabulary level strategically
11. Avoid starting actions
12. Cut out unnecessary words

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